I've been looking to give and receive honest critiques, not things such as "cool" or just looking at the positive, but pointing out what I did wrong. If anybody want to give me a critique, please do (and by critique I mean in the form of comments, as I am too poor to afford paid membership). I welcome even the any critique, so long as it is meant to help, rather than just give praise or bash. Also, if you want a critique yourself just say so and I will give a completely honest comment.